Pages 10 and 11 are here. You can read the story thus far here, or go to the start of chapter 6 by clicking an image.
What do you think the smoke is coming from?
What kind of people do you think they will be? Will they be hostile or friendly?
Zoe and Peter seem to disagree a lot.
Sorry for being slow lately. I know I should have four pages, not just two.
Here are the next three pages of chapter 6. This is becoming a pretty long chapter. You can read the story thus far here, or click on an image to jump to chapter 6.
Did you think Lloyd was dead? I’m sorry to disappoint you.
I’ve made a lot of mistakes on these pages. Sorry.
I’m starting to regret coloring everyone red, but I can’t turn back now. Do you think it’s good or bad to have this limited coloring?
Is it effective to have Lloyd crying, or is it just needlessly disturbing?
Here are the next three pages *gasp!* Read the story thus far here, or go to chapter 6 by clicking an image. Things have come a long way, and there still is a ways to go.
Things take a turn for the surreal. Will anyone survive?
Are square farmers absolutely horrifying, or silly and absurd?
Sorry it’s only three pages. I was busy yesterday. Page 6 took twice as long as any of my normal pages.
Here are the first three pages of chapter 6. Read the story thus far here, or jump to chapter 6 by clicking the image.
This is the beginning of a journey.
Do you think these farmers will accept his message?
Here are the last three pages of chapter 5. You can read the story thus far here, or start at chapter 5 by clicking on an image.
This new kid (Crane, wasn’t it?) . . . what do you think of him?
Which side would you take?
What do you think about the identical army of bumpkins?
Here’s page 4 and five. You can read the story thus far here, or just chapter 5 by clicking on an image.
Things are starting to get strange.
Would you accept the gift from Lloyd?
P.S. It’s been a week. I’m sorry. I’ve been busy programming a computer game with my brother. Expect more information on that soon.
P.P.S. I have a Facebook page now.
Here are the first three pages of chapter 5, “The Red Child.” You can read the story thus far here, or you can jump to the start of the chapter by clicking any of the images.
This chapter introduces a bunch of characters. We also learn some weird stuff about the Orange Code.
Why do you think the Orange Code supports square pumpkins?
Do you think Lloyd is a crackpot?